I'm thinking about the city, Luz, being set sorta in the middle of the wodds, and the whole 'you can find it unless you're led to it by someone who's been there already' thing would be in place. It'd be sort of a city of scholars, and of magicians and sorcerers and wise fools and misfits with ears and wings and tails and hooves.
The MC would be running from something or other, don't ask me what, and would get found by one of the 'church boys' or a priest-in-training for the weird religion of luz and led to the city. She'd meet Magdelena, a sort of witch who can't really do much, but is charsimatic and very sneaky and sly and gets things to go a certain way. And she'd meet the librarian guy, who'd teach her cool stuff and...yeah, this parts still prety vague.
But there'd be trouble back home, and it'd be one of those things where to live in complete happiness, and ignore the pains of others, is irresonsible and not really living anyway, so she has to go back and set things right. and things proceed and the big main baddie is named Eliza, at the moment, and that's all I got. Kinda vague, but it's an idea at least.
Maria, I love your characters! You're so much farther then me!
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